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[Thinker DEMO]

Good start

Really good song i was feeling it. almost like the feel of "fireflies" by that owl band. I think you should change the beat though as it doesn't seem to fit the song and the melody needs to change up, a little bit of strong sturucture?

DDman465 responds:

I never really made a song out of the 4/4 beat so it's something I have to touch up on. I had my doubts about the beat, and the repetative melody too, I'll see what I can do. Thanks for reviewing.

[Nub&Scribbler - Our Mistakes 1]

good

I like it alot. Nice mixing instument mix and eqing. check out my profile thanks.

Scribbler responds:

Thank you. I will check you out.

[new izzle]

meh

wow you a re def. using standard sounds. dont u edit them using filters or patches? Work on your kicks and make the song longer. I find that writing with lyrics helps me with the progression of the sound. Better yet listen to a sound u like and try to emulate in. thats how you'll learn what amkesa complete song/progression so u wont stop on a loop. also please stop with the voice or at least add an effect to it! Where is the bass? Checkout my track called "She has left you" and review, thanks alot.

Deathzone responds:

~. X? " i thought it might be useful in a flash menu or somethin."

[Boozer - The One]

Excellent!

you are a faboulous producer. Much respect! i gave this a 5 is my fav. tune of NG good job. check out my song call "She HAs Left You. thanks.

ThunderBass responds:

Thanks

[Cold Embers]

yo dude

Swith it up alittle bit. It gets very repetitive. You need to EQ as all the sounds are jumbled up together and uc ant pick out the different melodies if there is different ones.

Kafziel responds:

Thanks for the advice, I'll take it into account in my later works.

[Intro..]

wtf

wtf is this sh*t. u actually spent the time to put this up?

Black-Cloak-of-Night responds:

It was actually for something and someone specific. You weren't it. or him.

Bye now.

[Twisted Travels]

IT is twisted but not in a good way.

I was really trying to like this bu t other than the mixing I know you coudlhave done alot better. Seems u jsut threw a bunch of instruments together and called it music. Where is the feeling, where is the emotion? Heres a tip, try to make lyrics when u make music that way it creates a specific emotion and effect. LEarn a bit of music theory and trya gain.

Twistedtechnology responds:

its been hard for me the last month or so to make anything. I guess you're right, i did just kinda slap it all together, and now i realize its just a horrible mess. Honestly i think it kinda sucks as far as the percussion goes.

As for learning music theory, i dont have time for that; and aside from what this song portrays, i have a pretty good grasp on the concept of how to write music.

I have just hit a really nasty wall ><